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morning.

Journal Entry: Wed Feb 10, 2016, 8:00 PM
if my words fall
upon your ears   gentle
and serene

littered leaves below
your feet, gathered
and whispering

an ocean vast
of constellations deep
our minds the root,
our hearts beneath

at once we soar
over snowy peaks

the caress of morning
upon our cheeks


Special Valentine's day poem. :')   The premise here is that there are two lovers sleeping together and in their dreams they explore the world.  At the end we see them waking up with the morning sun shining bright upon them both.  Woo, love.

This has been a special collaboration with JustACapharnaum and MarcosRodriguez for the Valentine's Day Art Exchange 2016!  See their pieces below:

Morning by JustACapharnaum
morning by MarcosRodriguez
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paper-raiin Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful. The words are so visual and soothing.
Lovely work! :aww:
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ScarletWarmth Featured By Owner May 1, 2016   General Artist
very captivating. :D simply poetic & soothing!
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brennennn Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Your words are always so lovely, dear.  Thank you.  :)
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Ithilloth Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016   General Artist
Thank you for this captivating minute journey. :aww:
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Burntherabbitout Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
wonderfully arranged
very soothing to the mind
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016  Professional Writer
This is lovely and very eloquent. :heart: Great work. 
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you! :heart:
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2016  Professional Writer
I only told the truth but you're welcome. :heart:
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12memories Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016   Artist
This was a pleasant read.
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad. Thank you. :)
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016   Photographer
This is really lovely, it has a great rhythm to it with a mellow, calm sweetness that feels like a quiet morning :heart:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You never cease to amaze me with your thoughtful and eloquent comments, Ashley!  Thank you! :heart:
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autumnicity Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Student General Artist
This is gorgeous - so intimate and delicate. :love:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Leigh, you're so kind!  I'm glad you felt that way about this poem. <3
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autumnicity Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2016  Student General Artist
You're very welcome! :heart: It's always a pleasure reading your work.
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Whimsical-Dreams Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016  Professional Photographer
Very beautiful :love: :aww:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, love! :cuddle:
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