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peach blossom rain drops
flood my veins against your stars—
heavenly charade
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WingDiamond Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbutt-headplz::iconsaysplz: Uhh That's a Cool High-Cool!
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mockingbirdontree Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
Wonderful words!
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brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)
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mustlovelaura Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2015  Hobbyist
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brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:cuddle:
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015   Photographer
This is magnificent, your use of language is just so beautiful :heart:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely thing to say! Thanks so much, Ashley :heart:
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2015   Photographer
You're welcome Brennen :D
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely work! :clap:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Lili. :)
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SlayerGOLD1928 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You are an artist
This is an awesome haiku
It is snowing on mount Fuji
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brennennn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You have a
wonderful way
with words.
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TanyaSimoneSimpson Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
This is gorgeous :aww: I love how you've created such vibrant imagery in so few words. Haiku is one of my favourite forms of poetry to read.
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Tanya, it's one of my favorites as well. I have so much fun writing them. :) Thank you for your wonderful and kind words! :hug:
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autumnicity Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Student General Artist
An absolutely flawless haiku. I love your diction... :heart:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa, thank you so much, Leigh! You are wonderful. :hug:
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autumnicity Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Student General Artist
My pleasure Brennen, I can't wait to see what work you create in the future! :huggle:
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. :huggle: :heart:
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brennennn Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, love! :heart: :hug:
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Always. :heart:
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